Temptation: Six Word Fridays

by Belinda Munoz on August 6, 2010

truffles

Temptation, there you are in surplus
Fiddling with my strength, my weakness

Stunning on the surface, you trespass
Your flimsy promise dilutes my consciousness

You seduce me, assault my senses
Hoping I’m a sucker, no sale

Don’t you know, my trained hippocampus
Remembers your purpose, your evil animus

You create a rumpus, a circus
Your essence, messin’ with my business

I tell myself, I’m making progress
I practice, don’t need your service

But secretly I think of you
Oh, luscious pieces of breathtaking you

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1 Mel Gallant August 6, 2010 at 5:37 am

oh yum-yum! that photo knocked my socks off! it’s 8:37 a.m. and all i want are truffles…

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2 Tony Single August 6, 2010 at 6:15 am

And after gorging on those exquisite words, now I’m drowning in drool like Homer Simpson! 😛

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3 Nicki August 6, 2010 at 6:26 am

Wonderful words! I had a real time getting past the photo, though. My mind kept moving to “do I have the ingredients to make those?”

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4 Meg August 6, 2010 at 6:32 am

Oh jeez, not even 8:30 am and my morning palate is warped 😉
Seriously, though, loved the poem, can imagine it performed as neo-rap, or maybe beatnik and cannot shut out the image of chocolate truffles that are now burned in my brain……..
aaaaarrrrrgghhhh.

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5 Melissa August 6, 2010 at 12:31 pm

How to resist such chocolatey lusciousness?
Maybe by rereading these gorgeous words.

Both truffles and this post: YUM! 🙂

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6 Diana August 6, 2010 at 1:41 pm

You get props for resisting that!
Now excuse me while I drool…

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7 BigLittleWolf August 6, 2010 at 2:50 pm

FABULOUS.

1. I
2. want
3. those
4. scrumptious
5. chocolates
6. now !!!

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8 Tisha August 6, 2010 at 6:01 pm

Those are scrumptious words indeed Belinda! Who needs the chocolate Truffles? Your gorgeous poem has strenthened me in the midst of my 10-day fast. Well done!! 🙂

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9 Terra August 6, 2010 at 7:00 pm

OH YUM! – great words – you sucked me in – I will give in for sure

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10 Joy August 7, 2010 at 4:44 pm

Oh..chocolates ‘tempt me’ especially lovely homemade chocolates..
What tempts me most is the sunset and the moonbeams.. I am drawn to the Light of both..mesmerized, transfixed, as I bask in the Light provided..wrapping around my body, allowing my inner light to glow…

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11 Lori August 8, 2010 at 4:59 pm

I LOVE THIS!
1. Beautiful
2. Yum
3. Smile
4. Edgy
5. Ripple
6. Salivating

Thanks for this, sweet.
~xo

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12 Wilma Ham August 8, 2010 at 8:23 pm

Hahaha, well done, you are very good at this. My temptation is to say I am NOT good at this, Belinda is, so I will never try. xox Wilma

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