Comments on: Loose Ends

By: Steve isaak

Steve isaak — Sat, 23 Oct 2010 09:47:28 +0000

Wise, one of the best poems in this week’s lot. (There are six, maybe seven, others I’ve made this comment to, out of the 80 poems I’ve read.)

By: pete marshall

pete marshall — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 21:24:05 +0000

a great write that asks some searching questions…your opening held me with its deepness…cheers pete

By: Sender UpWords

Sender UpWords — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 13:48:54 +0000

Nice one shot. I have a big smile on my face as I read this again and again. Love and Light, Sender

By: Patty - Why Not Start Now?

Patty - Why Not Start Now? — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 05:54:10 +0000

Your poetry always causes me to reflect, B. (And smile, of course.)

By: Moondustwriter

Moondustwriter — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 02:48:27 +0000

if….

the questions in life make the quest worth the journey

nice One Shot

Moon smiles

By: tuberider

tuberider — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 21:08:53 +0000

Yup, that’s why life isn’t perfect, so we can have poetry. Nice one.

By: Justine

Justine — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 20:20:22 +0000

I’m a believer of the yin and yang of life. If not for the darkness, how else could we truly appreciate the light? As usual, a thoughtful, beautiful piece.

By: Steven

Steven — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 19:35:05 +0000

Truly beautiful! A zen-like representation of our non-dualistic world!

By: dustus

dustus — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 19:08:56 +0000

Complex questions captured clearly through poetic lines. Nice One Shot, Belinda!

By: Keith

Keith — Thu, 21 Oct 2010 15:24:15 +0000

Hello Belinda,

An awesome poem. You weaved together poetic phrases and profound statements; thought provoking and inspirational all at once.

Beautiful job Belinda.