Comments on: A Typical Atypical Day

By: Eva @ EvaEvolving

Eva @ EvaEvolving — Thu, 11 Nov 2010 18:04:35 +0000

“You, me and him
Ensconced in warmth
Hands clasped, hearts full”

This brought such a smile to my face! I just love the image of you, your husband, and your son – what a great, loving family!

How do I remember my days? I think it is in moments. Simple, routine moments that warm my heart. Walking the dog. Holding hands with my husband. Laughing together.

By: pete marshall

pete marshall — Thu, 11 Nov 2010 12:25:34 +0000

kinda sits well with my poem this week…forgetting all thats packaged..all the hype and just enjoy you, em & him…great share,,,cheers pete

By: Shashi

Shashi — Thu, 11 Nov 2010 09:13:34 +0000

Beautiful imagery… and your words like ‘Broken compass on hope ocean’ were very interesting..
Thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

By: Gay Cannon

Gay Cannon — Thu, 11 Nov 2010 00:56:08 +0000

What an innovative way to gather up the sweerness of your family for us to see, feel and know. Thank you for a beautiful poem. Gay @beachanny

By: Joy

Joy — Wed, 10 Nov 2010 23:25:17 +0000

Wow!!! Awe-some!
I remember the warmth of the sunshine..and the smiles in my day..all of the ones I was honored to experience..and those within my heart..Your work here sure brightened my smile..love it!

By: Ben Langhinrichs

Ben Langhinrichs — Wed, 10 Nov 2010 22:09:01 +0000

Nice one. I like the rhythm of this.

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By: Claudia

Claudia — Wed, 10 Nov 2010 20:51:04 +0000

i loved the ..Promise in-a-box sailing with a
Broken compass on hope ocean…
very nice use of imagery in your poem belinda – enjoyed it!

By: shan

shan — Wed, 10 Nov 2010 20:47:19 +0000

Beautifully penned x

Shan
@Awdures

By: Liz

Liz — Wed, 10 Nov 2010 20:38:23 +0000

I like your poem, and the picture is pretty.