Comments on: Palpable Fiction

By: Steve Isaak

Steve Isaak — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 22:07:28 +0000

Love the last stanza – it’s excellent.

By: Marci

Marci — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 00:25:24 +0000

Love it – Belinda , you are a word wizard I love the stanza about babies, growth spurts too.

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By: Sara Healy

Sara Healy — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 20:00:09 +0000

Belinda,

BRAVO! What a fantastic poem. My favorite stanza was this one:

Fat-cheeked newborns
Raising humbled parents
With love, wisdom, forgiveness
Through giggly burps
And milky slurps,
Astronomical growth spurts
And developmental quirks.

I absolutely loved the descriptions in this stanza and the truth that our children raise us as much as we raise them:~) I LOVED this:~)

By: The Exception

The Exception — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 19:28:03 +0000

Great to see you again!
I have to admit that this left we asking more questions than anything else… nuances upon nuances!

By: Rudri

Rudri — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:55:27 +0000

Glad you back Belinda. I always enjoy reading your poetry. I love this particular stanza: “Every detail
Seen or unseen
Preserved and perfected
Like the chase of
An ideal real
Only in the twinkle
Of the mind’s eye.”

By: Schmabes

Schmabes — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:01:06 +0000

Hola Chica,

Es muy bueno!

By: Eric Alder

Eric Alder — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 17:36:34 +0000

A great many truths have been lost in time’s passing, while in their stead have risen great multitudes of falsehoods. A very contemplative One Shot, Belinda!

By: Scent of my heart

Scent of my heart — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 16:51:41 +0000

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By: Sender UpWords

Sender UpWords — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 14:00:36 +0000

This is a tremendous piece of poetry. Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender