Comments on: Now — double tetractys

By: Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being Rudri

Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being Rudri — Tue, 15 Mar 2011 20:12:11 +0000

This is awesome. Poetry and awareness in one packed punch. Love the pace, rhythm, and message in your words

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By: Olivia

Olivia — Sat, 12 Mar 2011 10:06:48 +0000

An awesome take Belinda!

Nice structure with music in it! The imagery played with is well done
Smiles xx

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By: Cathy

Cathy — Thu, 10 Mar 2011 23:14:49 +0000

The words cadence are like a single breath – first in, then out. Great structure and the words work well.

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By: Mama Zen

Mama Zen — Thu, 10 Mar 2011 14:21:11 +0000

This is amazing.

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By: Marlee

Marlee — Thu, 10 Mar 2011 13:54:11 +0000

Hi Belinda,
This poem and your blog are beautiful. I have a heart for those hurting in the Congo and I appreciate your calling attention to their cry. I like what I see here. I’ll be back!
Best,
Marlee

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By: Kavita

Kavita — Thu, 10 Mar 2011 07:32:40 +0000

Wooww… loved the pace and rhythm in this one… I could almost hear music in the background… very nice!!
And the structure is fantastic!! I’ve got to try this!! Thanks for the info about the form…

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By: Jannie Funster

Jannie Funster — Wed, 09 Mar 2011 23:01:27 +0000

There really IS so much we can do to improve the now of so many people. A beautiful reminder wrapped in such a warm shawl of hope in this poem. Thank you, Dear Belinda.

xoxo

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By: Andy

Andy — Wed, 09 Mar 2011 22:27:10 +0000

Nicely done..and another new form to play with too!

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By: dustus

dustus — Wed, 09 Mar 2011 20:54:58 +0000

There is a palpable immediacy to your lines, but what really gets me is the shape the poem takes, which matches the pic, and even kind of looks like spillage. Awesome.

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By: The Exception

The Exception — Wed, 09 Mar 2011 17:29:53 +0000

Calls to action – Wonderfully written poetry… This post has it all.

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