Comments on: Yesterday

By: Mel Gallant

Mel Gallant — Tue, 10 May 2011 00:21:13 +0000

Belinda – your poetry is beautiful and tight – always a joy to read.

By: Moondustwriter

Moondustwriter — Sat, 07 May 2011 18:42:59 +0000

love you quote it resolves your 55 nicely

thanks for your visit and happy weekend

moonie

By: Joanny

Joanny — Sat, 07 May 2011 05:12:44 +0000

It is very difficult to live in the moment- we carry our past with us, and so true it crowds the present preventing us from fully living in it. Wonderful lyrical poem , I like Jannie take on it, because it is all those things the good the bad, everything.. Lovely ff 55 , — just plain lovely.

joanny

By: Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being Rudri

Rudri Bhatt Patel @ Being Rudri — Sat, 07 May 2011 05:11:00 +0000

Deadlocked chase, nothing crowds space like
yesterday.

I absolutely adore this line.

By: Katherine

Katherine — Sat, 07 May 2011 03:54:51 +0000

Great use of internal rhyming here.

“The past is a guidepost, not a hitching post. ~L. Thomas Holdcroft”

I love this quote too! Nice way to end your poem.

By: Shanae Branham

Shanae Branham — Fri, 06 May 2011 22:53:07 +0000

Your words are very intense. Nice piece. Not quite sure what it means?

By: Mama Zen

Mama Zen — Fri, 06 May 2011 22:23:41 +0000

This is excellent!

By: Belinda

Belinda — Fri, 06 May 2011 22:04:10 +0000

I love what it made you think of, Jannie. It can be about tanning and watching tides as a teen while pondering the futility of war. If it resonates in any way, then they’re no longer just a jumble of words (and that makes me happy!). xoxo

By: Jannie Funster

Jannie Funster — Fri, 06 May 2011 21:36:15 +0000

Is this about tanning as a teen?
Watching tides?
About the futility of war?

I’ve no idea, but it sure made me think of varied things, eh?

Nicely evocative!

xoxo

By: Steve Isaak

Steve Isaak — Fri, 06 May 2011 19:50:51 +0000

Perfect, love this.