Dazzle me.
Sizzle your spark. Beam
a light for
all to see
all that is good in this world,
dying and reborn.
.
For imperfect prose.
++++++++++++++++++++
This is a shadorma, a six-line poetry form with the following number of syllables per line: 3-5-3-3-7-5.
++++++++++++++++++++
{ 17 comments… read them below or add one }
“all that is good in this world, dying and reborn.” I love this line, Belinda. The sun warms our heart
I, too, loved the last line. Lovely.
Beautiful. The last line enraptured me as well. (Hugs)Indigo
Nice tight poem – tough style too…and best of all great theme.
What a great prayer! All that is good in this world… is so much.
A Spanish haiku – brilliant – and the discipline!!! Harder than containing a tweet to 140 characters or less. And the message – I heart the message. This was awesome, smiling from ear to ear. Thank you. God Bless and keep you and all of yours.
simple and beautiful…great picture and yes rebirth…
“Dazzle me” – what a bold prayer, like something David would have dared to ask! I like it.
Thanks for introducing me to an unfamiliar form, too. Will have to play with that myself. I’m so glad you visited crumbs and took time to comment so I would follow you here.
God bless you!
Dazzle me.
Sizzle your spark.
These words just leapt off the page with such vigor and joy…sweet!
Love the photo and the sun
I see your gift, and am blessed by it, to be able to wrestle a thought into a structured format like this. And still have it overflow its edges. Just like the sun…
Succinct and evocative. Well done Belinda.
wow, what an amazing photo! And I love that poetry form (have written a few myself.)
many blessings,
Sheila
Sizzle your spark.
LOVE this line… and the photo belinda, incredible. such talent, you.
Oh! Oh! *hopping up and down* I want to be dazzled too!
May your week be filled with light.
mind blowing..
impressed by your talent in wriitng ..keep it up.
check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.